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English Text Book - VNR College
e-Mail Writing
e-Mail Writing
In this digital age, one must know digital behaviour/conduct to communicate better digitally.
Therefore, effective email writing becomes a crucial skill in both professional and personal communication.
Here are some key tips and best practices:
1. Clear and Concise Subject Line
- Purpose: The subject line should clearly indicate the email's content or purpose.
- Example: "Meeting Scheduled for August 20th, 2024" or "Feedback Request: III.B.Tech Results"
2. Proper Salutation
- Address the Recipient: Use the recipient’s name and title if appropriate. For example, “Dear Mr. Sachin/ Ms. Mandana,” or simply “Hi Virat/ Hi Chandana,” depending on the level of formality.
- Generic Salutations: If you don’t know the recipient’s name, use “Dear Sir/Madam” or “To Whom It May Concern.”
3. Introduction
- Purpose: Start with a brief introduction or state the purpose of the email.
- Example: "I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to discuss the upcoming project deadline."
4. Body of the Email
- Be Direct: Get to the point early in the message. Avoid unnecessary details.
- Use Short Paragraphs: This makes your email easier to read.
- Bullet Points: Use bullet points or numbered lists for clarity, especially when listing items or steps.
- Stay Professional: Maintain a respectful and professional tone, even in difficult situations.
5. Call to Action or Closing Statement
- Clearly State Next Steps: If you need the recipient to take action, be clear about what you need and when you need it by.
- Example: "Please review the attached document and provide your feedback by Friday."
6. Closing
- Polite Sign-Off: Use a closing phrase such as "Best regards," "Sincerely," or "Thank you."
- Signature: Include your full name, job title, and contact information if appropriate.
7. Attachments
- Mention Attachments: If you’re including attachments, mention them in the body of the email (e.g., “Please find the report attached.”).
- Double-Check: Always double-check that you’ve attached the necessary files before sending the email.
8. Proofread
- Check for Errors: Before hitting send, proofread your email for spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
- Tone Check: Ensure the tone is appropriate for the context and recipient.
9. Avoid Jargon and Abbreviations
- Clarity: Avoid using industry-specific jargon or abbreviations that the recipient might not understand.
- Example: Instead of "FYI," you could say "For your information."
10. Use a Professional Email Address
- Address: Ensure that your email address is professional (e.g., yourname@company.com).
11. Consider the Timing
- Send at Appropriate Times: Avoid sending emails late at night or on weekends unless it’s urgent.
12. Reply Promptly
- Timeliness: Respond to emails within a reasonable time frame, typically within 24 hours.
Example of an Effective Email:
To: (Addressee email ID)
Subject: Completion of Summer Internship at Infosys
Dear Prof. Amitabh,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I have successfully completed my summer internship at Infosys Campus, Hyderabad as part of my academic requirement.
During this internship, I gained valuable experience in [mention key areas or skills you focused on both your core subject-related and personal level improvements with regards to your skills and teamwork etc].
I will be preparing a detailed report on my experience, which I will submit by [mention the deadline or specific date if applicable]. I look forward to sharing my learnings and how they might contribute to my academic and professional growth.
Thank you for your guidance and support throughout this process.
Best regards,
[Your Full Name]
[Your Student ID]
[Your Department]
[Your Email Address]
Clichés
Clichés
Clichés are phrases or expressions that have been overused to the point where they have lost their original impact or meaning. They often become predictable and uninspiring because they've been used so frequently. Here are some common examples of clichés and explanations for why they might be considered overused:
"At the end of the day"
- Often used to mean "ultimately" or "when all is said and done," this phrase can become tiresome because it’s a go-to phrase in many contexts, making the speaker's point seem less original.
"All that glitters is not gold"
- This means that not everything that looks valuable is actually valuable. It's a well-known saying that can feel worn out due to its frequent use in both conversation and literature.
"Every cloud has a silver lining"
- Intended to convey that there's something good in every bad situation, this phrase has become a bit of a platitude, offering comfort in a way that can seem unoriginal or insincere.
"Fit as a fiddle"
- Meaning very healthy and strong, this expression has been used so much that it can come across as uncreative.
"Read between the lines"
- This means to understand the hidden meaning or implication of something. Over time, it has become a standard way to express this idea, losing its freshness.
"Think outside the box"
- Encouraging creative thinking, this phrase has been so overused in business and motivational contexts that it can feel like a tired suggestion rather than an inspiring one.
Using clichés can make writing or speech feel unoriginal and predictable. Writers and speakers often strive to avoid clichés to keep their language fresh and engaging. Instead, they might seek out new ways to express common ideas or invent novel metaphors and phrases.
Redundancies
Redundancies
Redundancy refers to repeating the same thing again within the same sentence.
Redundancies often creep into our language, be it in speaking or writing.
Redundancy makes the meaning confusing, and can change the meaning or can give wrong meaning, and can also make your reader/ listener think that you are bad at the English Language.
For Example, Look at the sentence below:
'The ATM machine is out of order.' (This is a wrong sentence because it is a redundant sentence)
(Explanation: "ATM" stands for "Automated Teller Machine," so saying "ATM machine" is redundant because "machine" is already part of the acronym "ATM.")
So, Redundancy in English refers to the use of words or phrases that are unnecessary because their meaning is already conveyed by other words in the sentence.
Redundancy involves repeating the same idea, making the expression longer than needed.
Remember this: Reducing redundancy helps make writing clearer and more concise.
Here are a few examples:
Redundant: "In my personal opinion, I think that we should leave."
- Explanation: "In my personal opinion" is redundant because "I think" already indicates a personal opinion.
- Right Sentence: "I think that we should leave."
Redundant: "Bhairava returned back to the house."
- Explanation: "Returned" already implies going back, so "back" is unnecessary.
- Right Sentence: "Bhairava returned to the house."
Redundant: "They each took turns one after another."
- Explanation: "Each" and "one after another" are redundant because "took turns" already suggests this.
- Right Sentence: "They took turns."
Redundant: "Deepika made a new innovation."
- Explanation: An innovation is, by definition, new, so "new" is redundant.
- Right Sentence: "Deepika made an innovation."
Redundant: "The end result was surprising."
- Explanation: "End result" is redundant because "result" alone implies the final outcome.
- Right Sentence: "The result was surprising."
🔁 Common Redundant Phrases (and Better Alternatives)
| ❌ Redundant Expression | ✅ Better Alternative | 💬 Why? |
|---|---|---|
| Repeat again | Repeat | “Repeat” already means “do again.” |
| ATM machine | ATM | “M” already stands for “machine.” |
| PIN number | PIN | “N” already means “number.” |
| End result | Result | The result is already the end. |
| Advance planning | Planning | All planning is done in advance. |
| Past history | History | History is always about the past. |
| Free gift | Gift | A gift is by definition free. |
| True fact | Fact | Facts are always true. |
| Added bonus | Bonus | A bonus is already an addition. |
| Close proximity | Proximity | “Proximity” means nearness. |
| Final conclusion | Conclusion | The conclusion is the final part. |
| Unexpected surprise | Surprise | A surprise is something unexpected. |
| Each and every | Each / Every | Using both adds no meaning. |
| Join together | Join / Combine | “Join” already means “bring together.” |
| Future plans | Plans | Plans refer to the future by nature. |
| Basic fundamentals | Fundamentals | “Fundamental” means basic. |
| Return back | Return | “Return” already means “go back.” |
| New innovation | Innovation | Innovation implies something new. |
| Advance warning | Warning | A warning is always given in advance. |
| Collaborate together | Collaborate | “Collaborate” already means work together. |
| Unexpected surprise | Surprise | Redundant repetition. |
| Completely full | Full | “Full” can’t be more than complete. |
Voice in English
Voice in English
In English grammar, the concept of "voice" refers to the relationship between the subject and the action (or verb) in a sentence. There are two primary voices in English: active voice and passive voice.
Active Voice:
- In active voice, the subject of the sentence performs the action expressed by the verb.
- Example: "The dog (subject) chased (action) the cat." Here, the subject "the dog" is performing the action of chasing.
Passive Voice:
- In passive voice, the subject of the sentence is acted upon by the verb. The focus is on the action rather than the doer.
- Example: "The cat (subject) was chased (action) by the dog." In this sentence, the subject "the cat" is receiving the action of being chased by "the dog," which is emphasized in the sentence.
Key differences between active and passive voice:
- Active Voice: Direct and straightforward. The subject is the doer of the action.
- Passive Voice: Indirect and often used when the focus is on the action or when the doer is unknown, less important, or to emphasize the action itself.
Here are some examples to further illustrate the contrast:
- Active Voice: "She wrote the report." (Subject = She, Action = wrote)
- Passive Voice: "The report was written by her." (Subject = The report, Action = was written)
In general, active voice is typically preferred for clarity, directness, and emphasis on the subject performing the action. Passive voice can be used when the focus is shifted to the action itself or when the doer of the action is not the primary focus or is unknown. Understanding and appropriately using both voices is important for effective and varied communication in English.
Impersonal Passive Voice:
The impersonal passive voice is a specific form of passive voice used in English grammar where the focus is on the action rather than the doer (the subject). It's called "impersonal" because the sentence does not specify who is performing the action. This type of construction is particularly useful when the identity of the doer is unknown, irrelevant, or when the speaker wants to generalize the statement.
The impersonal passive voice is formed using the pronoun "it" as the subject, followed by the verb "to be" (in an appropriate tense), and then the past participle form of the main verb. Here's the basic structure:
It+be+past participle verb
Examples:
Present Simple Impersonal Passive:
- "It is said that he will arrive tomorrow." (The action of saying is emphasized, but the speaker does not specify who said it.)
- "It is believed that the world is round." (Focus on the belief rather than who believes it.)
Past Simple Impersonal Passive:
- "It was reported that the team won the championship." (Emphasizing the report rather than the reporter.)
- "It was rumored that they were dating." (Focus on the rumor without specifying who spread it.)